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***I've had this idea for a novella series floating in my head for a little while and wanted to jot some of the idea down. I doubt I'll ever get around to it, or if I do it'd be after MG Dallas is finished. Idea is that the main character wears the skinsuit of a succubus to fight other people wearing the skins of other monsters, such as a vampire, werewolf, mummy, the blob, etc, all the while trying to prevent the suit from taking over his body. Anyway, here's an 18+ short story prototype of the idea. I only did one round of editing on it, so it's probably rough to read.***

Alex was severely in debt with no way to pay it off. Originally going to an ivy league school to become a defense attorney, he was kicked out months before graduation after unknowingly being set up to appear as if he was cheating, resulting him from being blacklisted from every law school in the country.

He managed to last as long as he did by taking on more debt through payday loans while working minimum wage at a dry cleaner as he struggled to get back on his feet. But he was at his limit, and fell into a pit of suicidal thoughts.


One day, he received an email stating that he could pay off his debts and come out as a very rich man if he took part in a game. The details regarding the game were incredibly vague to the point they might as well not be any. He thought nothing of it, he put in his details and address, thinking the worse that'll happen is he'll get more junk mail and marketing calls.


He had forgotten the email not long after, but remembered it when his landlord complained about a heavy black trunk being delivered to his apartment, and the landlord spraining his back trying to move it out of the office after the delivery guys dropped it off. Alex picked it up, questioning his landlords strength as it didn't appear that heavy to him, but just awkward to hold.


Back in his apartment, he opened the trunk, where he found an old scroll resting above a velvet sheet covering something. He opened the scroll and read its contents, which described the rules of the game.


>Around the city, twenty individuals were given suits that would change the wearer into a monstrous form, giving them incredible power.

>These twenty individuals must use their suits to confront one another and kill each other until only one remains.

>The winner will be awarded five hundred million dollars.


Alex was in disbelief and horror as he wondered what the hell he had gotten himself into. He read further on, where the scroll stated that failure to cooperate once accepting the trunk from the delivery guys, and that participant will swiftly be executed and removed from the game. Also, the suits gave its wearer more power the more it succumbed to the suits will. The more the wearer gave themselves to the suit, the stronger they'll be and the higher chance of surviving the game. However, there's a chance that if the wearer succumbs to too much of the suit's will, the suit will take over its host and fuse with them, fully transforming them, and the original soul and identity of the wearer will be forever lost.


Alex gulped as he placed the scroll next to him and lifted the velvet sheet, revealing the skin of a devilish looking succubus. This confused him, considering he was male, and the suit given to him was obviously female. Another slip of paper fell from the suit and landed next to the mask which still laid in the bottom of the trunk. He picked it up and read its contents.


>Amelia the Succubus.

>Has moderate strength and acrobatic abilities.

>She has the ability to charm her opponents and suck the life force out from them.

>Be warned, the suit's ultimate desire is to be layed, so the wearer should refrain from participating in sex while in suit, lest completely losing their self to Amelia for all eternity.


Since there was no choice in the matter, Alex decided to try on the suit to get used to it before being thrust into a fight for his life. He tossed his clothes to a corner of his barren room and held Amelia before him. One thing that caught his attention was that the suit was warm to the touch and felt like actual flesh, as if it were alive. He sat down on the edge of his bed and opened the back of the suit. His feet slipped into suit's leg. There was a slickness to the suit's inside, which made it easy to slip on. After pulling the suit's leg up to his knee, he repeated the process with the other leg. Once both on, he stood up while pulling up the suit's waist over his. He carefully tucked his private into that of the suit's crotch. Moments later, he felt his legs and crotch tingle as the suit got to work morphing his body so that it fit more with Amelia's form. The feeling of his crotch shrinking into himself was intensely erotic, almost like he was having sex, except it was reversed. Instead of his boner pushing outward, his penis was retreating back up inside of him, creating a working vagina. He sat back down on the bed, his expanded buttocks pressing against the sheets.


Next, he lift up the torso and slipped his right arm into the sleeve, pulling on it as his fingers slipped into the fingers of the suit's hand like a glove. He watched in awe as the suit transformed his manly hands into something more effeminate. Clasping his two hands together, he noticed how much smaller and softer his feminine right hand felt. Using his right hand, he stroked his exposed thighs, shivering in excitement as he could feel it as if the suit was his actual body. With his right arm fully transformed, he repeated the process with his left arm and soon it too had become that of Amelia's. Her chest hung loose in front of him as he struggled to reach for the zipper on the back of the suit. Once the zipper was pulled up to the top of the suit's neck, Amelia's breasts began to expand as he felt a strange yet satisfying pulling on his chest. The process took about a minute before it was finished. Alex almost wished that it would never stop due to how much he was enjoying it. Hands clasped to his newfound breasts, Alex let out a soft moan as he enjoyed how sensitive they felt.


When he stood up, he quickly noticed Amelia's tail had come to life, swinging back and forth right above Amelia's buttocks. Alex quickly realized that he could control it. He maneuvered it around as if it were second nature, like he had always had a tail. When he stood up and walked over to the trunk, he noticed a sway in his hips with each step he took. The suit had changed his mannerisms into that of a woman's. It had occurred before he had even realized it, having not noticed his sitting posture changed so that he defaulted to closing his legs moments ago.


He knelt down and picked up Amelia's face. He stroked the mask's short hair, enjoying how the strands felt between his fingers. The mask's face was smooth with no noticeable imperfections. His hand slipped into the inside, feeling the familiar slickness like that of the suit as one of his fingers poked through the mask's eye hole. Flipping the mask upside down so Amelia's hair hung below the mask's face, Alex took a deep breath as he went to complete his transformation. The edge of the mask's neck hole held back his bangs as the mask slid over his head. The mask appeared distorted as his head made its way through its neck. With one last tug, the mask engulfed him.


Alex didn't need to bother adjust the mask over his face, as the mask adjusted his head into it instead. His ears were pulled backward to fill in Amelia's pointier ears. Her lips wrapped around his, giving it more of a puffy look. Her lips didn't stop there, however. It continued inward into his mouth as he felt the mask invade his body, enveloping his teeth and tongue, and going even further as to warp his vocal chords. A small feminine gasp leapt from his ruby lips, as he felt almost violated as the mask was taking over.


Poking sensations ran across his scalp as he felt the mask's hair digging itself into his skull, attaching their roots. He instinctively reached for Amelia's hair, feeling them tug against his skull as he pulled it. Her hair had now become his. Shortly after, her tiny horns dug down into him, securing themselves. Finally, the mask's eyelids forcibly closed over his eyes, bringing his eyelids down with them. He felt them fuse as his eyelashes mixed with hers, becoming much fuller.


With the mask having become his new face, his transformation into Amelia was complete. Or so he thought. Before he could go and look at his new form, something felt like it was forcing its way into Alex's subconscious. He collapsed on the edge of his bed, gripping his sheets with one hand while holding his head with another, letting out loud sexual sounding moans. Soon his entire body felt incredibly sensitive and warm as he struggled to get up, but wound up falling to the ground. His hands reached for his new breasts and crotch, where the sensation was strongest. Soon, he felt something thrusting inside him between his legs, despite there being nothing there. His hands flung themselves above his head as he felt some sort of presence grab his hips, continuing to thrust inside of him as his legs spread apart.


“W-what's happening?” his high pitched feminine voice cried as he felt himself come to an orgasm.


The thrusting stopped, allowing him to catch himself. He was breathing heavily as he pushed himself up. It was a struggle for him to walk to the bathroom, almost tripping as he did. Flipping on the light switch, he grasped the edge of his sink and looked in the mirror.


“Holy shit,” he exclaimed, looking into the eyes of a succubus.


He placed a hand to his cheek as he leaned close, noticing that despite all the change, his eyes were still the same blue color as they always been. He bared his teeth, not seeing anything unusual. Same went for his tongue, despite the invasive feeling he felt before. Turning around, he saw that the zipper was still there. There was a worry hovering in his mind that maybe the zipper had disappeared and trapped him inside like the scroll had mentioned earlier. He sighed in relief knowing he can still take it off.


Worries now put aside, he started checking Amelia out, making poses and faces in the mirror, humoring himself. There was no denying that he was very attracted to Amelia's appearance. He leaned forward, pushing Amelia's breasts together. The suits nipples were protruding through the suit's outfit. When he reached to touch it, he felt a wave of pleasure come over him.


An idea came over Alex, causing him to start groping his breasts, enjoying the sensitive sensations they gave off. He stared at himself, licking his lips and he enjoyed his massage. That strange feeling of penetration he felt before was really good, he thought. So much so that he started to want to experience it again.


Amelia started to rub her body all over, staring at her reflection. She arced her back with her hands to her butt, gripping them from outside the pantyhose. She took a couple steps back away from the mirror and spread her legs, moving her hands along them erotically. Next, she lowered herself down to the floor, pretending that she was sitting on top of a muscular man, his cock rising into the air. She lowered herself onto the imaginary cock, using her fingers to replicate the feeling of the tip of a penis rubbing against her clit beneath her clothes while her other hand moved between her outfit and her nipple, rubbing it profusely. She enjoyed the sensations washing over her as she thrust her ass back and forth as a part of her make believe sex act.


“Aw yes,” she said between gasps of breath. “Right there, baby.”


She continued to moan as she closed her eyes, envisioning her sexual encounter. She could almost feel the man's hands grip her thighs as she rocked back and forth. She let go of her breast and held onto the edge of the sink as she started to thrust faster. More and more her finger rubbed against her clit, wanting a dick to fill it more than anything.


“I-I'm coming,” she said between fits of pleasure, before her back arced and she started to cum with a loud gasp.


She held onto the edge of the sink as her body twitched in pleasure. It had been a very long time since the last time she had an orgasm. Hundreds of years if she remembered correctly.


She got up from the floor and looked at herself in the mirror. Her two tiny horns had grown tremendously, now appearing like those of a bull. The whites of her eyes were now black with red pupils. White fangs bared themselves as she opened her mouth, rubbing her left horn as if it were a penis. A snake like tongue slipped out between her lips as she savored her appearance. When she turned around, she saw her skin stretching itself across the zipper, ready to engulf it. She let out a coy smile. Her body was about to become wholly hers again.


Before she could enjoy it for long, a sense of dread overcame Alex. He looked in horror at his new appearance, having let himself get carried away by Amelia's sexual provocations. It was then that he realized what was going on earlier when he felt like he was being fucked. She was imprinting the feeling of having sex as a woman into him so he'd be more willing to go and find someone to fuck, allowing her to take over his body.


Alex gripped the bottom of his neck, desperately searching for the edge of the mask, but could not find it. Next, he started to pull on Amelia's bull like horns while fighting the sexual feelings surrounding him. As he resisted, he could feel the horns start to shrink. He looked in the mirror and opened his mouth, noticing his newfound fangs receding and his tongue taking a more normal shape.


He gripped the sink as he forced Amelia's invading thoughts out of his mind. The more he did, the more the suit reverted back. The skin over the zipper receded back to its original state. After he saw his eyes return to normal, he reached for the edge of the mask and found it. He pulled as hard as he could, the mask clinging onto his face, almost refusing to let go. Once he managed to get a good grip, he pulled the mask over his head, feeling Amelia's hair rip out of him as he pulled. Her horns popped off as her lips and eyelids detached themselves.


With one last tug, he managed to pull the mask off and throw it into the bathtub. While gasping for air, his male face stared back at him atop Amelia's body. There was a brief sense of relief before realizing that this wasn't the end. He remembered how he was gonna be forced to put her mask back on and fight other people in similar suits. Not only was he gonna be fighting for his life, he was also gonna have to fight against Amelia wanting to take him over. He remembered the scroll talking about how the more the wearer gave themselves to the suit, the more powerful they'd become, and then he thought about the masks transformation as Amelia started acting out her sexual fantasies.


“That must be what they meant,” he said as he sat down on the toilet, resting his hands between his knees.


He looked over at the mask. Though it was silent, he could feel an urge to put the mask back on, which was no doubt because of the suit. With it being late at night, he decided to take the suit off and worry about the game tomorrow. He wondered what forms the others will take, and how he'll have to actually murder someone, lest they murder him first.

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:iconrfk11756:
rfk11756 Featured By Owner 3 days ago
Amelia can visit me in my dreams to take my night emissions...
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axan312 Featured By Owner 6 days ago
great story idea, i really like the overtaking by the suit.
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:iconlegoboy130:
LEGOboy130 Featured By Owner May 21, 2017
Are you going to draw more of these when you're done with MG Dallas?
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:iconmegazone23pt2:
Megazone23pt2 Featured By Owner May 21, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Most likely no.
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:iconlegoboy130:
LEGOboy130 Featured By Owner May 21, 2017
Ah. Well I'm okay with it even though it looks pretty awesome.
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kokodin Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2017
There is a way to "kill" all the opponents without actually killing anyone, just tease or trick them to become their suits slaves and be devoured by them in the proces.
Or is it so when the suit snack on the body of other participants Alex would still have to kill other suits?

Anyway, there is always a hope for more to see things trough the end?
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Jtgop Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2017
What happens if someone skips town, using the suit to defend themselves from there would be assassinations? What happens if someone's inate desires are stronger then that of the demon's, for example, what happens if someone with lust already equal to Amelia's?
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Rammaukin Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017
WOW Great story!
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ConvolutedPlot Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017
Absolutely wonderful story. I could go on about how the description and imagery is great, or the fantastic scenario and plot, but to be honest I'm just fucking aroused as hell. 10/10
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carlspud18 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017
You've made a lustful story that made us amazed. what a sight.
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ashleyketchum12345 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017   Digital Artist
where will u be posting this anyways?
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:iconmegazone23pt2:
Megazone23pt2 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's all of it.
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ashleyketchum12345 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017   Digital Artist
make moar pls >.>
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SymbioteMaskLover Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017  Student Writer
I really dig it, and I think what appeals to me the most about the idea is the chance to meet other "suited" people and introduce their personas and the histories of the people beneath the costume as the story goes along. The trap with our "genre" often comes from focusing just on developing and characterizing the protagonist (if even that) and not the other characters that surround them. I find stories tend to become repetitious and dull beyond the initial transformation without a hook beyond the surface level fap bait - which is why I like Bodysuit 23 so much.

I know you said Novella, but I think this would be a really cool comic series. Whatever the case is, if you need someone to bounce ideas off of just let me know. I mostly do F2F, but I'm really interested in getting into doing some M2F stuff too.
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ChaosDX1 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017  Student General Artist
Well this sounds awesome. I spent most of today thinking of how it would play out and imagining all kinds of different scenarios. Most of them dedicated to figuring out how a Succubus would fight. Isn't their power just seducing people? Not very deadly. Came up with some fun ideas though.
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RockinRadio Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017
Don't know how she would fight?
Imagine CatWoman vs Batman
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:iconchaosdx1:
ChaosDX1 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017  Student General Artist
I did come up with a few ideas after a while. Bayonetta's another that came to mind.
Also Morrigan Aensland, but I've never played her games and have no idea how she fights.
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alruna12345678 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017
brilliant beginning i would love to read this story
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TNobody0214 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017
Its a brilliant beginning. If you do make a story or just some one off (in some way) I would love to read them
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theflame234 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017
This sounds really interesting, I really do hope that you actually continue this story.
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AlexaPadme Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017
Please continue
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megasuperstarman Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017   General Artist
You know the funniest thing it that I have this idea too, but it as different. It was male would wear a succubus suit but it more like a previous succubus past it to him and teaches him the ways to be a succubus. I like the story you have I kinda how it does become real if not im not going to be bent out of shape im just going to keep enjoying your stuf If you know what I mean >wo b
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TheChitinousTeen Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Now these are the kinds of skinsuit stories I love! Monstress skinsuits...
I myself have written several stories with similar ideas. Nothing M2F, but if it helps this story become a proper series, I'd happily be willing to collaborate or help out. ^^;
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LordDreik Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017
Mmmm... Sounds like a good idea ^^.
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:iconradicaldanny:
RadicalDanny Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017
Why still a guy in a bodysuit? :(
We need more girls in bodysuits! ^^
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Megazone23pt2 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Because that's what I fap to. Ftf doesn't so anything for me.
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:iconrockinradio:
RockinRadio Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017
Holy shit we should be friends



Actually wait that's slightly creepy
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:iconradicaldanny:
RadicalDanny Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017
I don't care for M2F, I love F2F XD
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:iconmegazone23pt2:
Megazone23pt2 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You ain't gonna find it here much.
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:iconradicaldanny:
RadicalDanny Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017
You could have Miranda make herself a different suit, maybe, in the future for herself? ^^''
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:iconmegazone23pt2:
Megazone23pt2 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No.
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wildfox8 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017
OH SNAP 
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puke456 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017
^ Made me lol
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RadicalDanny Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017
aww :(
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ashleyketchum12345 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017   Digital Artist
OMG GIMMEH THE SUCCUBUS SUIT
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SuperCena12 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017  Student Writer
Holy s**t ! This is awesome !
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IrateResearchers Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
this could be a good anime series.
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bob-waffleson Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017
I like the idea, kind of like the symbioint/ venom saga of Spiderman. I Would personally have found it more interesting if the two actually spoke to each other (unless I overlooked something.) Although the whole tournement thing feels... IDK, cliche? Perhaps it could be similar to Magical Girl Dallas, but as a monster hunter who has to become the monster's he slays to slay even more horrifying beasts while trying to not become drunk with power, almost like a Helsing-esque plot. However, my biggest suggestion is to not use body suits. Use something else, something more mystical to fit the theme, like masks. Ancient Masks housing the spirits of demons. Or better yet, Housing the sorrows, regrets, and ambitions of dead warriors, who were able to pass on to the afterlife once monks sealed all the negative energy preventing them from passing on into masks with some long forgotten ritual. These masks, when worn, allow a person to take on the likeness of the warrior, while retaining some physical semblance of themselves, and being granted special powers attributed to the warrior, but at the cost of being plagued by those same sorrows and regrets, and upon overuse or abuse of the mask, particularly if it goes against the spirit of the warrior, results in the wearer becoming a mindless monster. The ultimate evil could be a mask housing all the malice of an ancient civilization that should never be worn, because it slowly corrupts the wearer's mind, until the mask gains it's own consciousness and can assume a physical form with which it kills and ditches the wearer.
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Megazone23pt2 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That could work, but the plot exists just so I can have an excuse to have a succubus bodysuit. Years ago this guy ( touch.pixiv.net/member.php?id=… ) drew a sequence of a guy putting on a demon girl skinsuit to infiltrate their realm, which I really liked. I wanted to make something along those lines, thus what I have here.

Honestly, I doubt I'll ever go through with making anything out of it. There's plenty of ideas I've had over the years that never go anywhere. Bodysuit 23 and MG Dallas are outliers.
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bob-waffleson Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017
ehh, as long as you keep trying Im sure the outliers will be the ones that didn't become something.
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SuperCena12 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017  Student Writer
This concept should get a separate story!
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CaldoRosa Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
cool
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firecat32 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017
dame it now i want to hear the rest of the story.
this sounds really interesting in concept, the idea of 11 more people hunting alex down with monstrous powers, while he is that one person with powers that are not good for head on confrontation. i also like the idea of trying to not give in while having to accept it as well to survive. this is really interesting and well written.
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HidaAtarasi Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017
Suits that take over the wearer are always awesome
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AWSOMEDUDEX90 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Whoa noice
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MineTopia43 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Artist
OWO
Woah it sounds interesting
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shadowdelta47 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Now that is a DEEEEEEEEEEP story
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Guitaroo91 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017
A very interesting concept and a great prelude chapter. Hopefully you'll follow through with this!  Your work is amazing,  keep it up! 
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